Does your novel, memoir, or project need fresh eyes?
Developmental editor for fiction, memoir, and academic writing
As Head of Editorial at NAC Literary Agency and a traditionally published author, I've helped more than 100 authors develop their manuscripts from early draft to publication-ready submission.
Working closely with agents, publishers, and authors gives me unique insight into what makes a manuscript stand out in today's market.
I've worked across commercial fiction, romance, memoir, and academic writing, helping authors strengthen their manuscripts for both traditional publication and self-publishing.
Whether you're seeking a full developmental edit, help preparing for submission, or one-on-one coaching, I can help you strengthen your writing and move confidently toward your publishing goals.
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Discuss your project via Zoom/phone and determine the best next steps.
Or experience my editorial feedback on your own writing before committing to a larger project.
What is developmental editing?
Developmental editing focuses on the big-picture elements of a manuscript: structure, plot, pacing, character development, theme, and point of view. Through detailed editorial feedback, I'll help you identify what's working, pinpoint what's holding your manuscript back, and create a clear path forward.
Each developmental edit includes in-text comments throughout your manuscript, light line editing where appropriate, a comprehensive editorial report outlining strengths and areas for improvement, and a follow-up Zoom or phone consultation to discuss the feedback and create a clear revision plan.
What I offer
Genres and projects I edit
Fiction: romance (all heat levels), women's fiction, book club fiction, romantasy, suspense, thriller, mystery, historical fiction, literary fiction, LGBTQIA+ fiction, YA, science fiction, fantasy, and middle grade.
Formats: Novels, novellas, short stories, and selected poetry projects.
Nonfiction: Memoir, academic articles, PhD theses, and popular culture writing.
Who is developmental editing for?
• Writers preparing to query agents
• Authors planning to self-publish
• Writers receiving feedback that “something isn’t working” but aren’t sure why
• Authors who have completed a draft and want professional guidance before submission
Who I work with
I work with novelists (indie and traditionally published), memoirists, academics, and aspiring authors at every stage of the writing journey—from early drafts to agent submissions and publication-ready manuscripts.
Why work with me?
• Head of Editorial at NAC Literary Agency
• Traditionally published author represented by a leading US literary agency
• Editorial partner for emerging and bestselling authors
• Active member of IPEd (Institute of Professional Editors Limited)
• Former creative writing teacher
What clients say
Here’s what authors have said about working with me:
Glenn Kleier, Worldwide bestselling author
Prophet of Queens (Thriller)
"Over the years I've had the privilege and pleasure of working with some outstanding editors, and I must say, Bella's eyes are among the best. The whole point of editing is to make clear to the writer issues she/he is simply too myopic to spot. I found myself nodding in agreement with regularity. Always her suggestions were food for thought and stimulated much reflection."
Jessie Cal, USA Today bestselling author
Memories Lost (Romantic Suspense)
"I am so grateful for Bella's expert eyes on my manuscript. She not only pointed out basic errors but also made me think about why I had made the choices I had made. Her editorial help has made me a better writer.”
Fees
Fees vary depending on the scope, length, and complexity of your project. Please get in touch for a tailored quote.
Whether you're publishing your first book or your fifteenth, my goal is to help you create the strongest possible version of your manuscript—compelling, polished, and ready to find its audience.
I'd love to hear about your project and discuss the best path forward.
Questions?
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