Full Manuscript Critique - Developmental Edit

Take your story to the next level. I will resolve “big picture” issues in your manuscript, including structure, form, plot, and character. You will receive some light in-text line edits, and tips about grammar, style, and “voice.” This will be accompanied by a multi-page editorial letter detailing the strengths and weaknesses of your project—and how to fix the corresponding issues. To up your literary game, I also provide craft resources, specific to the areas which need to be strengthened.

In the edit, I’ll examine whether your project meets genre expectations. In terms of pacing, I’ll make sure it’s hitting the right story “beats.” Is there a compelling inciting incident, have you avoided the “sagging middle,” and does your climax end with a satisfying resolution? I’ll watch out for plot holes and inconsistencies. Are your main characters “3D,” fully fleshed-out? I'll read to see if there is enough conflict/obstacles to your character’s story goals and internal arc.

Pitch Package

I help authors with their tag lines, queries, Twitter contest pitches, and even the dreaded (eeeek!) synopsis. Plus perfecting the first three chapters. Think of it as a literary safari…and we’re hunting the big five.

“How to get an agent/publisher” coaching 

Here I provide one-on-one coaching tailor-made for your publishing needs.

Fees

Please get in touch and we can discuss different options, dates, and fees. I’m looking forward to speaking with you and digging into your story. My red pen is ready!